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jarek2011
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Can anyone take a look at the text below and correct my mistakes?
This year we went orienteering in S�r Lenangen. Orienteering day was launched a day before an autumn break. Ten orienteering posts were set up of by the course planners. The students had practised in advance to locate cardinal points on the topographical map. The moment we arrived at the orienteering place, we found on the map where we were. We went up from school and started looking for orienteering post put up along the lighted running track. The students were split into groups and went around searching for the posts. On the way to the running track almost everyone managed to find 4 orienteering posts. We pitched a camp and from there the students started searching for the rest of the posts. It was exciting and challenging to run around in the woods and wild marshland. Some posts were set up a long distance from the base and they were hard to locate but many of the students managed to do so. We made a bonfire, barbecued food, picked berries and had a whale of a time ! |
20 Oct 2012
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EstherLee76
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I made a couple of little changes
This year we went orienteering in S�r Lenangen. Orienteering day
was launched a day before an autumn break. Ten orienteering posts were set up of by the course planners. The students had practised locating cardinal points in advance on the topographical map. The moment we arrived at the orienteering place, we found where we were on the map. We went up from school and started looking for the orienteering post put up along the lighted running track. The students were split into groups and went around searching for the posts. On the way to the running track almost anyone managed to find 4 orienteering posts. We pitched a camp and from there the students started searching for the rest of the posts. It was exciting and challenging to run around in the
woods and wild marshlands. Some posts were set up a long distance from the base and although they were hard to locate, many of the students managed to do so. We made a bonfire, barbecued food, picked berries and had a whale of a time!
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20 Oct 2012
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jarek2011
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Thank you EstherLee76 for your helping hand! |
21 Oct 2012
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