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Message board > Reflected poems???
Reflected poems???
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fsams
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Reflected poems???
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Look at what I have composed!!!
SMILE ------------------ Special and charming
Manifold is smile
Intricate when full
Lustful not always
Enchanted is smile
-Reflection-
Smile is enchanted
Always not lustful
Full when intricate
Smile is manifold
Charming and special
(Written by Fsams)
Anyone has this kinda poems??? What ya think bout it?
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12 Oct 2009
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adriennesmiles
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hi, i really like this poem...
i don �t want to criticise it but in the second line on the second part, wouldn �t it make more sense to say: �And never lustful �
just a thought, anyway, it �s good. :) |
12 Oct 2009
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alien boy
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I like it. It �s a great little poem & exercise!
re the lustful line...
maybe 1st verse:
lustful not, always
reflection:
always, not lustful.
Cheers,
AB
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12 Oct 2009
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Mariethe House
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smile always welcome
Smile always happy
Smile everyday
Smile till the end of the day
Smile .....
Always
ever
Forever
Smiling
Till the end of your days. 
( just for fun!)
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12 Oct 2009
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