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 24VICTORIA
 
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							| Help with a translation! 
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 Can somebody help me with this translation. I need it for a friend of mine and I thinkit does not sound like perfect English.
 
 Thanks a lot  and have a nice day, Victoria
 
 
 Next, it is described the churches and the musical activity developed
there during the chronology that the article comprises.
 /Next, the
churches and the musical activity developed there during the chronology
that the article comprises are described.
 
 Which one is better?
 
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 mblack977
 
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							| Hi Victoria   Both sentences are not really correct but i think you want the second one with a couple of changes.     �Next, the article describes the development of the churches and music that took place during the period �   hope this helps   Matt  |  22 Oct 2009     
					
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