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		Ask for help >  Hello!!!  Please,  can anybody help me reading and correct the mistakes of my text? I really need your help... Thanks!!!     
			
		  Hello!!!  Please,  can anybody help me reading and correct the mistakes of my text? I really need your help... Thanks!!! 
		
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 karina maroni
 
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							| Hello!!!  Please,  can anybody help me reading and correct the mistakes of my text? I really need your help... Thanks!!! 
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							| My first English teacher introduced me to English language through a
dynamic and motivating teaching practice, so I fell in love with the language.  In an effort to improve my knowledge I attended
a private English course simultaneously elementary and secondary education. Whereas
I was enhancing my knowledge in English, I could realize the insecurity and
lack of preparation of my high school English teacher who had poor fluency in
English, and teaches in a monotonous way. Believing that I had potential
and willing to make difference I decided to be an English teacher. I finished
college in 2001. In
2002 I began teaching at an English course (for beginners). One year later,
I started working for a private school. In 2003 I completed my
specialization degree. In 2006 I was selected
to work as an English teacher for Mato Grosso do Sul state.   As a public school teacher,
I have worked with elementary, high school and Youth and Adults� education.
During the time I have been taught English in a public school, I took part in several
continuing education courses in English language and Educational technologies
areas, aiming to improve my educational practice to face the challenges of
teaching a foreign language in Brazil.
Because despite the important role that the English teaching can fulfill in the
democratization of knowledge, enhancing the access to other cultures and
equalizing the social and professional opportunities,  in Brazil there is still much resistance and
prejudice in the acquisition of a foreign language mainly for the popular
classes (which mostly are our students), they have a distorted view, thinking the
English language is far from their reality and do not have much prospect of
working life, especially in the country towns, which is where I perform my job.I think the biggest challenge
of the English teachers is to act effectively to reverse this situation,
recovering the motivation from the popular classes, reviving their interests, showing
them that the English teaching is not a neutral territory of
knowledge, but may represent a fertile field of performance criticism,
with purport and democratizing.
 It is not easy to work in a
motivating and effective way,  because the
daily school life, with numerous charges and depreciation of the English Language
by students and even by some co-workers sometimes cause discouragement and
weariness. In front of this reality I realize that continuing education is
necessary for the English teachers perform their function better and better. Therefore
I intend to continue investing in my professional career, participating in relevant
courses in my acting area and make a Master to constantly improve my function.
 And I believe the participation
in a program like this would play an important role in the construction of my
identity like an English teacher, providing me many opportunities. Besides the
rich cultural experience and to improve oral and written skills, learn new
teaching techniques including new technologies that I consider essential
for a quality education, improve technical methodology, lesson planning,
knowledge application, among other skills, will surely help me to develop a shifter pedagogical practice
able to reach a meaning and attractive teaching.
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 ldthemagicman
 
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| Hello!!! Please, can anybody help me reading and correct the mistakes of my text? I really need your help... Thanks!!! 
Red = insert; Green = delete; Purple = change.
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| My first English teacher introduced me to the English language through  a dynamic and motivating teaching practice, so I fell in love with the language. In an effort to improve my knowledge I attended a private English course , taking elementary and secondary education simultaneously. Although I was enhancing my knowledge in English, I  couldrealized the insecurity and lack of preparation of my high school English teacher who had poor fluency in English, andteachestaught in a monotonous way. Believing that I had potential , and willingwishng to make difference   ,   I decided to be an English teacher. I finished college in 2001 and then In 2002 I began teachingatan English course (for beginners). One year later, I started working for a private school. In 2003 I completed my specialization degree. In 2006 I was selected to work as an English teacher for Mato Grosso do Sul state.   As a public school teacher, I have worked within elementary, high school and Youth and Adults� education. In addition, during the time Ihave beenwas being taught English in a public school, I took part in several continuing education courses in English Language and also in the areas of Educational Technologies.areas,aimingI aimed to improve my educational practice to face the challenges of teaching a foreign language in Brazil.Because despiteI recognise the important role that theEnglishteachingteaching of English can fulfill in the democratization of knowledge, enhancingtheaccess to other cultures and equalizingthesocial and professional opportunities. In Brazil there is still much resistance and prejudice into the acquisition of a foreign languagemainly for the popular classesby ordinary people, (which mostly arewho form the majority of our students),theyPeople have a distorted view, thinking the English language is not for them and doesn�t have much connection with theiris far from their reality and do not have much prospect ofworking life, especially in the country towns, which is where I perform my job. I think that the biggest challenge oftotheEnglish teachers is to act effectively to reverse this situation.  We mustrecovering  the motivation from the popularclasses, motivate the ordinary people,revivingrevive their interests,showingand show them that theEnglish teachingteaching of Englishis not a neutralterritory of knowledge, but may represents a fertile field of performance criticism, with purport and democratizing. Is not neutral territory, but represents a fertile field of knowledge, opportunity, and purpose. It is not easy to work in a motivating and effective way. becausetheDaily school life, with its numerous criticismsnumerous charges and depreciationof the English Language by students and even by some co-workers sometimes causes discouragement and weariness.In front of Confronting this reality, I realize thatcontinuingcontinued education is necessary for the English teachers to perform their function better and better. Therefore, I intend to continue investing in my professional career, participating in relevant courses in myacting areasphere of education andmakeeventually take aMasterMaster�s Degree to constantly improve my function.to continue improving my knowledge. AndI believe that the participation in a program like this would play an important role in the construction of my identitylikeas an English teacher, and provideprovidingme with many opportunities.
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 Besides the rich cultural experience and to improve oral and written skills, learn new teaching techniques including new technologies that I consider essential for a quality education, improve technical methodology, lesson planning, knowledge application, among other skills, will surely help me to develop a shifter??? pedagogical practice able to reach a meaning and attractive teaching.
  
 I believe that the participation in a program such as this would play an important role in the construction of my identity as an English teacher.  In addition to the rich cultural experience, I will improve oral and written skills; lesson planning; the application of knowledge; and technical methodology.  Moreover, I will learn essential new teaching techniques and technologies that will give me a quality education.  These attributes will enable me to develop an excellent pedagogical background, from which I can deliver modern, attractive, meaningful lessons.   I trust that you will decide that I am a worthy candidate for this Course and that I possess all the necessary qualities. |  26 Sep 2010     
					
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 Lina Ladybird
 
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							| WOOOOOOOOOOOW!! Les, I think someone owes you a huge piece of cake and a big cup of coffee! ;)) |  27 Sep 2010     
					
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