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Grammar and Linguistics > Conclusion paragraph. Question.
Conclusion paragraph. Question.
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carinita
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Conclusion paragraph. Question.
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Good evening,
Is it OK if I refer to Romeo & Juliet and A Midsummer Night �s Dream as timeless literary works?
The conclusion of my essay originally started:
"After reviewing these impressive works by Shakespeare, it could be concluded that two opposing viewpoints coexist in them"
The thing is I don �t want to finish the essay saying "Oh I love these plays" "Shakespeare was a genious"
The new conclusion is...
"After reviewing these timeless literary works by Shakespeare, it could be concluded that two opposing viewpoints coexist in them"
Any other alternative you can think of?
Your help will be appreciated |
27 Jan 2011
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yanogator
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It sounds good to me.
Bruce |
28 Jan 2011
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Apodo
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Maybe you could do it something like this:
Although this review has shown that two opposing viewpoints co-exist, these impressive plays stand as an important part of Shakespeare �s timeless literary works.
The emphasis in the conclusion is then on the works, rather than the two viewpoints. |
28 Jan 2011
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