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Grammar and Linguistics > Help me please!
Help me please!
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szamoca
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Help me please!
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Dear Colleagues,
I had to translate one of my student �s application to a summer camp. I would like you to have a look at my translation because I want to be sure it can be understood. There were some Hungarian expressions that I �ve never thought of before in English, so I �m not sure about them.
Team work: I have worked in
various types of teams during school lessons, I also attend extra curricular activities
such as audovisual communication and written media lessons as well as I
acquired the use of media resources and equipment. Moreover I am a constant participant
of school ceremonies and competitions.
Thanks in advance.
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10 Mar 2011
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dianaaschner
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Mostly a few nit-picky punctuation things, but overall it �s pretty good. Here �s my revised version:
Team work: I have worked in various types of teams during school lessons. I also attend extra curricular activities such as audiovisual communication and written media lessons. In doing so, I have acquired the use of media resources and equipment. Moreover, I am a constant participant in school ceremonies and competitions. |
10 Mar 2011
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dawnmain
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I think you should put a full stop after school lessons.
�as well as acquiring � is grammatically correct but I dont think that is what you want to say.
acquiring knowledge of media resources... perhaps?
Furthermore, I regularly participate in ... (sounds more natural to me)
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10 Mar 2011
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szamoca
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Thanks a lot for each of you. You were really helpful.
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10 Mar 2011
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