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Is this sentence correct?
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EwelinaEwelina
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Is this sentence correct?
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Dear All, Is ths correct? Carbon offsetting means paying money to plant enough trees to reduce the same amount of CO2 in the air as it was produced by your journey. |
21 Jun 2016
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cunliffe
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...as was produced. (Miss out �it �) |
22 Jun 2016
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douglas
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I would also use "venture" versus "journey"
Carbon offsetting means paying money to plant enough trees to reduce the same amount of CO2 in the air as was produced by your venture. |
22 Jun 2016
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Apodo
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Except if you are carbon offsetting your plane flight - then journey would be suitable. |
22 Jun 2016
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cunliffe
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Why, Douglas? The sentence states �journey � and so that is what it refers to, isn �t it? |
22 Jun 2016
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douglas
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I wasn �t looking at it from a traveler �s point of view, but from a business persons point of view.
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23 Jun 2016
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