Our bac pupils chose Luckas Graham �s "seven years old" song for their bac sport (Tunisia) but they wanted to change the underlined parts. Does any one have any suggestions. Many thanks in advance.

 

 

7 YEARS 

Once I was seven years old, my mama told me
Go make yourself some friends or you �ll be lonely.
Once I was seven years old.

It was a big big world, but we thought we were bigger.
Pushing each other to the limits, we were learning quicker.
By eleven smoking herb and drinking burning liquor
Never rich so we were out to make that steady figure

Once I was eleven years old, my daddy told me
Go get yourself a wife or you �ll be lonely.
Once I was eleven years old.

I always had that dream like my daddy before me
So I started writing songs, I started writing stories
Something about the glory, just always seemed to bore me
Cause only those I really love will ever really know me

Once I was twenty years old, my story got told
Before the morning sun, when life was lonely.
Once I was twenty years old.

I only see my goals, I don �t believe in failure.
Cause I know the smallest voices, they can make it major.
I got my boys with me atleast those in favor
And if we don �t meet before I leave, I hope I �ll see you later.

Once I was 20 years old, my story got told
I was writing about everything, I saw before me
Once I was 20 years old.

Soon we �ll be 30 years old, our songs have been sold
We �ve traveled around the world and we �re still roaming.
Soon we �ll be 30 years old.

I �m still learning about life
My woman brought children for me
So I can sing them all my songs
And I can tell them stories
most of my boys are with me
Some are still out seeking glory
And some I had to leave behind
My brother I �m still sorry

Soon I �ll be 60 years old, my daddy got 61
Remember life and then your life becomes a better one
I made the man so happy when I wrote a letter once

I hope my children come and visit, once or twice a month
Soon I �ll be 60 years old, will I think the world is cold
Or will I have a lot of children who can bore me
Soon I �ll be 60 years old
Soon I �ll be 60 years old, will I think the world is cold
Or will I have a lot of children who can bore me
Soon I �ll be 60 years old
Once I was seven years old, my mama told me
Go make yourself some friends or you �ll be lonely
Once I was seven years old
Once I was seven years old

What about :

 

LIFE instead of "wife" / DREAMING ONLY instead of "lonely"

 

SPORTS HAVE BEEN TOLD instead of "our songs have been sold".

I like Maryse pey� �s suggestions a lot, but for variety I will add

 

"skill" or ("trade") instead of "wife", and  "hungry" instead of "lonely"

 "stories have been told" instead of "songs have been sold".

Thanx a lot dear maryse peyé and redcamarocruiser

 

Thanx a lot dear maryse peyé and redcamarocruiser

 

Get yourself a CAR, or you �ll be WALKING ONLY

Soon, we �ll be thirty years old, our YOUTH HAS BEEN BOLD 

Les Douglas

 

thanx a lot dear Douglas! I need all your help!

 

thanx a lot dear Douglas! I need all your help!