Help me correct this sentence

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Help me correct this sentence

valpa

Help me correct this sentence

Hi! I have this sentence which sounds incorrect.

To consolidate this success, the band performed 2 concerts with entries depleted in the Gran Rex.

I would say with sold out tickets. But, is it right? I need help here, pleaseee!

29 May 2019

spradley03

I would not say this at all.

I would say something like...

It looks like a bad translation.

"The band was finally successful, they performed two sold-out concerts at the Grand Rex."

30 May 2019

Agree with spradley. Or �with complete sellouts�.

31 May 2019