Hi dear friends,
It �s about combing two sentences with the correct relative pronoun. Other mistakes by my 8th graders.
 
Which one is correct???
 
First Example: a. He worked in a dirty place. 
                                b. Modern improvements didn �t alter it.
Choice 1: He worked in a dirty place where improvement didn �t alter.
Choice 2: He worked in a dirty place where modern improvements didn �t alter.
 
Another choice maybe???
 
Second Example: a- Bob �s work was considered tough.
                            b- He had experienced hard conditions while still young??
 
Choice 1: Bob whose work was considered tough had experienced hard conditions while still young.
 
Any other choice?? I feel the first one is not correct??/
 
Thanks a lot.
Nebal