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Proper English again...



joserik
Spain

Proper English again...
 

Hi, everybody!!

It �s 2.00 am and I �m still working on my adaptation of A Midsummer Night �s Dream. Could you please tell me if this footnote is clear enough for you? Is there any grammatical mistake?

[1] In the original version, Hermia�s father is called Egeus, who asks for Theseus� help in applying the Athenian law because of her disobedience.

 

Thanks a lot for your help in all my posts!!!

28 Aug 2009      





Mouna mch
Algeria

morning hard worker..

i think that there are no grammatical mistakes but still it is �heavy �.. i prefere a simpler one by omitting �who �!
 
 wish you all the best

28 Aug 2009     



Tere-arg
Argentina

I would like it better this way:


[1] In the original version, Hermia�s father  -Egeus-  asks for Theseus� help in applying the Athenian law because of her disobedience.



My doubt is  in bold


28 Aug 2009     



spring
Turkey

Tere-arg �s is better. Easier to understand.

I am not sure Tere-arg but can it be "help with" instead of "help in" ??

28 Aug 2009     



joserik
Spain

Thanks, friends...
Besos.

28 Aug 2009