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Suggestion for a welcoming TITLE
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Babs1966
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Suggestion for a welcoming TITLE
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Hello dear teachers,
On the 17th of this month I �m going to attend a Memorial related to my translation work of many years.
To make a long story short, I helped a man on his work and research in retracing the story of a B-17 that crashed in our region during WWII.
We found most of the families and we are going to receive them for a big ceremonial.
We want to make a welcome banner ... I came up with one title but I �m not really happy with it ... all suggestions are welcome.
"Welcome to the 1st B17 Crew Member Tribute"
I �ll put some pics and detail of this event after it happend ;) maybe a video.
Thanks in advence for your help;)
Babs 
PS: the families are coming from the States ;)
and we have an association here "The Moselle River" who´s making come more than 180 military from the infantery
for a big ceremony too ... we will be part of it |
6 Jun 2010
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imanito
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Hello Babs! First of all, I want to congratulate you for the great work you are doing in setting up this event. As to the wb, I have a humble suggestion:
"Welcome to the 1st Memorial Ceremony in honor of the B-17 Crew Members."
Or, you can just add to yours "Ceremony" at the end.
I hope I could have helped.
Looking forward to seeing the pics and Vids.
Hugs  Imanito |
6 Jun 2010
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Olindalima ( F )
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Hi Babs
That �s a wonderful and quite moving work you are doing - I can understand how deeply you are involved.
Just a suggestion, obviously you are completely in and I am out. I would prefer a title to refer to the ones who lost their lives in the crash, rather than welcoming their families; my opinion, you want the tribute to be to the ones who had their planed crashed, only after, you want to welcome the relatives.
Farewell to the B17 Crew .
Our Tribute
Just an idea,as I said you must know much better what suits and what doesn �t. If this is the first tribute, after so many years, it �s also the first goodbye, they never got one, so, it �s time to wave your white handkerchiefs and let them go,
Edit : I cut 1st ( obviously, I forgot it, sorry.
linda
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6 Jun 2010
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Babs1966
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Great point of view Linda ;)
Yes, after so many years .... It �s gonna be the FIRST tribute made to those crew members
I �m taking your advice in mind 
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Not all crew members past away on that crash.
5 were made POW
1 escaped by the "resistance"
3 died when bailed out
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6 Jun 2010
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fifey
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How about �Flying high �?
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6 Jun 2010
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Babs1966
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Thanks for your help ;)
Since it �s gonna be a banner for a dinner and it �s gonna be done in my friend �s home,
I finaly found the title ;)
Thanks to all ;)
I �ll be posting on the Teachers Caf� when the event is past
Good week to all
imanito, Linda and fifey many thanks for your time ;)
Babs |
6 Jun 2010
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