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Could you check this for me, please?
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mish.cz
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Could you check this for me, please?
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�Hello, my dear friends here, Is there anybody here who would take a quick look at this text and tell me whether it is ok? Thanks you very much. Welcome!
Dautus �s website is here for you- not only as a presentation of skill and industry,
but also as an easy and comfortable option how to get your hands on awesome stuff by ordering it.
Wood, antler, horn, bone, metal, all these are the materials I work with.�
Shields, lance/spear shafts, weapons, daily usage items as chairs, tables, beds, buttons,
knife- handles and much more stuff our ancestors
got in contact with every day of their lives, I can do it. Have you seen a picture of some ancient relic you would like to add to your equipment?�
Hand the picture or drawing over and I will make it for you.
Do you have some gear in the corner, dusty and rusty because it is torn,
broken or does not fit due to excessive beer consumption? Hand it over and I
am sure I can refit or repair it according to your wish. Mish.cz
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10 Oct 2010
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aliciapc
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Hi dear mish,
I �d change a few things:
... but also as an easy way for you to get hold amazing items just by ordering them (the other way sounds too informal and colloquial to me)
... our ancestors handled and worked with all the time (get in contact sounds like get in touch to me )
That �s all mish, but it �s just an opinion !
A hug! |
10 Oct 2010
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ldthemagicman
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Hello, Mish.cz.
This is just my opinion.
Welcome!
Dautus �s website is here, especially for you! It not only showcases our industry and skill, but is also as an easy way for you to obtain amazingly-attractive items, just by ordering them.
What material do you prefer? Wood, antler, horn, bone, metal? I work with all of these!
I make shields, lance or spear-shafts, weapons, and also household items such as tables, chairs, beds, knife-handles, buttons ... ... and many more items that our ancestors used every day of their lives. If you want it, I can make it!
Have you seen a picture of an ancient relic that you would like to add to your collection? Send a picture or drawing over and I will make it for you.
Do you have some rusty, dusty gear in a corner, unused because it is torn, broken or does not fit you, (due to excessive beer consumption)? Send it to me and I am sure I can refit or repair it, according to your wishes.
Les Douglas |
11 Oct 2010
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