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Gustavo20
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Poem
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depression is tearing me apart... no matter what pills i take... it just does not work... last night i wrote this... and i need to share it with someone... it does not matter who....
a piano from a distance
playing a soothing requiem
the weeping of mourners
echoing in each string
the bloodstained keys
by deepening grief stricken
by languid fingers struck
the horror draws near
pupils dilate with fear
capillaries to the surface come
bloodshot my eyes become
darkness cuddles me
in its cradle of shadows
and sings a lullaby to me
of eternal elusive sleep
by Gus
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4 Dec 2010
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nombasa
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Dear Gus
Thank you for your lovely poem. Poetry is a great way to express emotions that sometimes you don �t even know are there. If you need to talk, please send me a pm and I will gladly listen accross the continents.
Nombasa |
4 Dec 2010
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fidelina
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Absolutely beautiful and a very powerful poem. Keep on writing - you are definitely a very talented writer.
You are welcome to pm me if you want to exchange words 
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4 Dec 2010
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libertybelle
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From your heart to the hearts of others.
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4 Dec 2010
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mariannina
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Hi dear, you are a great poet, I love your poem and I understand your feelings, even if they are distant memories now!
If you need a granny...here I am!
I cuddle you and hug you |
4 Dec 2010
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JudyHalevi
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Lovely poem. Very emotional. Thank you.
Please get help for your depression. Do not allow depression to ruin your life. I lived with it for 10 years, and then got help, and it was amazing. I began living again.
hugs from Israel
Judy
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4 Dec 2010
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SueThom
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Yes, please get the help you need to assist you in overcoming depression. The world will be a better place because of the beauty you create with your gifts. We need you.
Sue
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4 Dec 2010
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anitarobi
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Life has too many beautiful sides to it to let depression cloud everything else beyond recognition. Let it all out through your poetry, give yourself time... and the lullaby you hear will become a pleasant one and give you rest in the night, to wake up eagerly to see the new day... |
4 Dec 2010
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Gustavo20
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thank you for all your warm comments... both these comments and the private messages... the psychiatrist told me to spend some time in a mental hospital... but I can �t right now... I still have final exams to take... but once I �m done with college for this year, I will go there... that is my last resource... if that doesn �t work... I am not sure what path I will take...
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4 Dec 2010
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