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Are these sentences right?
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beefeater
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Are these sentences right?
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Like other fishing towns Rikuzentakata was slowly
withering. The young people were moving to the cities so the population was each
time older as a result and the industries were experiencing difficulties.
Thanks
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9 Jan 2012
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libertybelle
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Like other fishing towns, Rikuzentakata was slowly
withering. The young people were moving to the cities, so the average age of the population was becoming older as a result and the industries were experiencing difficulties too.
That �s my take on this - hope it helps.
L
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9 Jan 2012
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beefeater
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Yes, it sounds much better! thanks again!
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9 Jan 2012
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