Hi,
It is generally OK apart from a few punctuation errors, and placement of the word OFF.
I have corrected it in red. Hope this helps.
Blue and Linda,
together with their friend Rafael the toucan, go to Luis�s workshop to take off the
chain that joins them,and they get it done. But the bad bird who helps the
smugglers catches Perla and puts her into the birds� float. Blue and his
friends want to set Perla free but they are caught and put into a cage.
-Oh, my
god! We�ve been caught again.
-Now they
want to take us out of the country.
The
Carnival float heads to the airport and Linda and the ornithologist go behind
it, but the plane with the birds takes off. Blue sets alls the birds free, out
of their cages and they all escape and fly to where Linda and the ornithologist
are. In the end, they all stay in the bird reserve. Linda and the
ornithologist fall in love and the two blue macaws have three chicks.
-I�m very
happy to be with you Linda!
-We�ll stay in R�o.