Hello, My name is Danilo and I asked my students from 8th grade to write about a trip, they could imagine anywhere in the world. But I had a huge suprise with my student Monalisa. She wrote a wonderful text, with a high level of quality. So, I would like to share her text, and If possible I would like you coment it, giving to my student positive comments and encouraging her to write more. I will print the comments and I will show her. She is going to be very happy. I certified and she didn ´t copy or paste the text from internet. It ´s her own creation. Please help me to encourage my student; she deserves that. She loves reading and writing. In thos link you can see the text: http://www.4shared.com/file/zb5tQX-3ba/MONALISAS_AMAZING_TEXT.html PS: Please, Do not forget of writing the country you are from. | 
